Bette Grossman – Parent Album

Hi Bette,

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Here is my thought about this album: there should be another spread between spread #10 and spread #11 to make the transition from the ceremony to the reception a bit smoother. I am thinking that if we put a spread that shows the conclusion of the wedding ceremony then the story will flow much better.

I can think that on spread #10 (right side) if we take out the photo in the middle of Abbey and Rudy behind the mens' shoulders then the spread will be more stronger.

Please let me know if what you think.

Thank you,

David Tsai

phone: 913 269 8337

Wirken Photography