Made the changes you requested. See attached.
Note two things: For spread 15 I did change the full spread portrait to the same scene but where you can see more of you two. Thoughts?
Spread 17 did not find your friends walking in but inserted and image just after where they are standing together. I believe that is them. :)
check it out out and let me know thoughts. I know that you were still waiting on the last few spreads but I like it. I think that Tyler pulled some of the strongest images when building those pages. If you have a different feel about it just give me an idea of what is bothering you, or what you think you want it to look like, and I can give some advice.